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  • Other » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Pause...Listen To Me

    Hello, Ash here for a review (: . A few things before i get into what i think. "I will give you the world. I will wrap you in warm ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Other » Realistic, Romantic Re: A females perspective.

    hello, ash here for a review. okay a few things before i get into what i think. first off the title. "a females perspective". the word "females" needs to have ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Living

    hello, Ash here for a review (: so a few things before i get to what i think My ankles are tied by your blood-red roses. My wrists are wrapped ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Day Dreams

    hello, Ash here for a review (: a few things before i say what i think I never heard hope(add period) I thought hate(add period) I had caused deny to ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Wings

    hello, ash here for a review (: so a few things before i get to what i think "When I was a little girl(add comma) there was a storm(add comma) ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A tornado

    hello, Ash here for a review so a few things before i get into what i think about the poem She said, " You're like a tornado", although I[i] did ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: "I'm OK." A Poem

    hello, Ash here for a review (: so, just a few things before i get into what i think "I"m not screaming that I'm not. in the word "I'm" you ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: del

    hello, Ash here for a review (: this poem is so painfully relatable, sadly. there's nothing that i can find to give advice on so, i will just point out ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, Narrative Re: slow down

    hello, Ash here for a review (: this was such a good read! i really enjoyed it. its so nice to read positive things about our world when theres so ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: An Ode to My Lonely Heart

    hello, Ash here for a review (: SO this is a great poem, however, there are just a few things that i need to point out for this reviews sake. ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Insecurities (??? Edited )

    hello, Ash here for a review (: once again, this is an amazing and truly beautiful poem. i love what youre saying however i have a few suggestions. your capitlization ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Girl with The Pale Blue Eyes

    hello, Ash here for a review (: this poem is truly beautiful. thank you so much for sharing this! i just have one thing to call you out on i ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: view from my driveway

    hello, Ash here for a review (: so, i really love this poem. the imagery is beatiful and really takes me somewhere else that isnt my reality and i appriciate ...

    Mar 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: As I go once more to rest

    hello! ash here for a review! let me say first and foremost that I really loved this poem. I think that it is interestingly written and is formatted in a ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Music Loving Ghost

    hello, Ash here for a review (: YES, THE ACROSTIC POEM IS BACK LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT YESSSS okay now into the actual review. I Feel like the ...

    Feb 4, 2018


You have light and peace inside you. If you let it out, you can change the world around you.
— Uncle Iroh, Avatar the Last Airbender