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Re: Pause...Listen To Me
Hello, Ash here for a review (: . A few things before i get into what i think. "I will give you the world. I will wrap you in warm ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: A females perspective.
hello, ash here for a review. okay a few things before i get into what i think. first off the title. "a females perspective". the word "females" needs to have ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Living
hello, Ash here for a review (: so a few things before i get to what i think My ankles are tied by your blood-red roses. My wrists are wrapped ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Day Dreams
hello, Ash here for a review (: a few things before i say what i think I never heard hope(add period) I thought hate(add period) I had caused deny to ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Wings
hello, ash here for a review (: so a few things before i get to what i think "When I was a little girl(add comma) there was a storm(add comma) ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: A tornado
hello, Ash here for a review so a few things before i get into what i think about the poem She said, " You're like a tornado", although I[i] did ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: "I'm OK." A Poem
hello, Ash here for a review (: so, just a few things before i get into what i think "I"m not screaming that I'm not. in the word "I'm" you ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: del
hello, Ash here for a review (: this poem is so painfully relatable, sadly. there's nothing that i can find to give advice on so, i will just point out ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: slow down
hello, Ash here for a review (: this was such a good read! i really enjoyed it. its so nice to read positive things about our world when theres so ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: An Ode to My Lonely Heart
hello, Ash here for a review (: SO this is a great poem, however, there are just a few things that i need to point out for this reviews sake. ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Insecurities (??? Edited )
hello, Ash here for a review (: once again, this is an amazing and truly beautiful poem. i love what youre saying however i have a few suggestions. your capitlization ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: The Girl with The Pale Blue Eyes
hello, Ash here for a review (: this poem is truly beautiful. thank you so much for sharing this! i just have one thing to call you out on i ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: view from my driveway
hello, Ash here for a review (: so, i really love this poem. the imagery is beatiful and really takes me somewhere else that isnt my reality and i appriciate ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: As I go once more to rest
hello! ash here for a review! let me say first and foremost that I really loved this poem. I think that it is interestingly written and is formatted in a ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: Music Loving Ghost
hello, Ash here for a review (: YES, THE ACROSTIC POEM IS BACK LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT YESSSS okay now into the actual review. I Feel like the ...
Feb 4, 2018
