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HELLO WOLFY HERE FOR A REVIEW AS PROMISED the critical type u asked for so the first thing i notice is that EVERYTHING is in present tense which i have ...

hello lillianna i bet you weren't expecting to see me here HUH well thankfully i'll be out of your hair in no time, i just wanted to give you my ...

HELLO ROSHIEL AND A LATE WELCOME TO YWS! i can tell this is meant to be a lighthearted poem, however the way it is presented turns it into a bit ...

HELLO THERE MORDAX, A BELATED WELCOME TO YWS thank you for sharing this poem with us! i'll be more than happy to give you my wee two cents on it ...

HELLO THERE YOU THREE VEEREN HERE FOR A REVIEW can i just first point out how absolutely gorgeous these lines are?? from beginning to end you had me hooked on ...

HELLO THERE YOSHI VEER HERE TO REVIEW let me start by saying you have done a very, very good job all around here with your poem. you've turned truth and ...

HELLO THERE HORISUN I AM HERE TO REVIEW FOR YOU first off i want to say i enjoy how bouncy and carefree this poem is. it's lighthearted and carries a ...

HELLO THERE AND A BELATED WELCOME TO YWS i'm glad you decided to share your work with us here, and hopefully i can help you out a bit with a ...

wolfe, had i been from another planet where the diets of my kind differed vastly from yours, and i was tasked with the quest of describing this oval shaped delicacy ...

HELLO OLIVIA WELCOME TO YWS first of let me say thank you for sharing this work with us. if ever there was a wholesome and warm-hearted poem in the midst ...

HELLO THERE LUNAR GIRL A BELATED WELCOME TO YWS FOR YOU first i want to thank you for showing your work to us, i enjoyed reading it through. what i ...

HELLO THERE FRIEND VEER HERE TO REVIEW YOUR PIECE first off i just wanna mention, including the title in the first line?? aesthetic. now i want to say that i ...

oh me oh my WLECOME TO YWS FIRST OF ALL and second thank you for sharing your work with us i want to say that i really enjoyed how simply ...

HELLO BECCA i want to say first welcome to YWS. I'm glad you have decided to share your work with us. now i have to start off by saying, the ...

hello there lumi i am here to give you my small two cents on your poem here now i have to start by saying i was quite surprised reading this ...