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This is a wonderful poem, with a playful genius to it! I love all of it so much. I'm definitely saving this and keeping it with me every day. Thank ...

I simply love this poem. It's short and not so sweet. It gets right to the point and tells you what the reader what you were trying to achieve. I ...

I really enjoyed this piece! I am in love with the way that you painted the picture that the girls are flowers. It sometimes seems that way with how delicate ...

This was a surprising find! I didn't expect to find something that fed me knowledge instead of numbing my head or causing it to explode with amazing fantasy/scifi/fiction. I enjoyed ...

This is a very breath taking poem! I just can't tear myself away from it! I'm going to print it out and take it with me to school just so ...

This is quite a fascinating story so far! I'm definitely hooked and I'll be looking forward to reading more. However, I have to say that I crave to read this ...

This poem touched my heart and I have to admit that I cried. For my entire life, I've been rejected by those who I love and recently, I've been forced ...

This is a very beautiful, very haunting poem and I loved every line of it. Thank you so much for posting such a beautiful poem! There is something so chilling ...

THANK YOU FOR EXPRESSING HOW I FEEL ABOUT SWEARING!! Ahem. Sorry. I lost my marbles there for a second. I love this poem so very much. I smile as I ...

Every line of this beautiful poem sent a shiver down my spine and a vivid sensory whirlwind through my system. "Salty tears and cigarettes": I can just imagine pressing my ...

Hello there~ I can say that I am in love with this piece down to the letters that make up each word. My only suggestion is to give the girl ...

I was very mystified and very haunted by this short story. I can't express to you how much I love this. However, I have a few nitpicks. In the first ...

This is a very beautiful haiku!! It's not every day that one comes across someone with a talent for haiku like this! However, I'm not so sure what you're trying ...

You have a very good voice for poetry. I can tell that you're really feeling this. However, I have a huge nitpick for you: PUNCTUATION. It feels as though you ...

I love this poem so much~ It's enchanting and it's reflective of the feelings of most hand-writing die-hards. I thinks that you can first improve this by separating things into ...