Ronald Raevsky is an amazing landscape painter who is well known for his beautiful landscape paintings. Born in Maysel, West Virginia, he started painting at a tender age. For the most part, scenic landscapes have been the source of inspiration, he also has several paintings, which are inspired from the utopian landscape theme. He has made around 500 paintings till date. As a child, Ronald Raevsky was a nature admirer with an inherent desire to paint the beauty of picturesque landscapes on his canvas.
A painter from the rural landscapes of Maysel, West Virginia, Ronald Raevsky is truly a maestro in landscape art. His art work is all about sketching scenic landscapes through his creative expression and amazing sense of vision. Since childhood, Ronald was a nature lover with an inherent desire to express the beautiful landscapes and the world around him through his artistic endeavor. He was just about 8 years old when he completed his first landscape painting. His family was amazed to see his awe-inspiring art work and became his support system even since.
After completing his graduation, Ronald joined a graphic design firm in NY and worked there for a few years. Though he was doing good and this job paid him well, he was waiting for a better opportunity. He used to visit Maysel, his hometown, whenever he had time and during one of these visits he happened to meet a businessman who offered him a lucrative proposition. As per this deal, Ronald would create paintings and that gentleman would advertise and sell them on his website. This was definitely a great opportunity for Ronald Raevsky and he accepted the offer without much a thought. This did surprisingly well to him and now he is well known for his mesmerizing art work and beautiful landscape paintings.
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This was a surprising find! I didn't expect to find something that fed me knowledge instead of numbing my head or causing it to explode with amazing fantasy/scifi/fiction. I enjoyed learning about Ronald Raevsky.
My only sort of criticism for you is for you to read through everything again and spot check for run on sentences. I've found quite a few. If you can fit "and" in between the thoughts, remember, you can place a semi-colon there.
Thank you for this knowledge~
I'm guessing this is an essay for school?
It's a good short essay, but I would've liked to hear more about his work and the techniques he uses. You do a little bit of this in the second paragraph, but never really go into it. In fact, what would be really good to do is include some quotes from him about what he does.
If there's a length limit, I'd get rid of the third paragraph. It just seems unnecessary and irrelevant. It's not really that interesting that he did graphic design. That's pretty much par for the course for any artist. What is interesting is what's unique about him and his work.
Anyways, there were a lot of grammar mistakes for such a short essay:
This is a run-on sentence caused by a comma splice in the middle of the sentence. Change the second comma to a period, though, and you'll be good.
The bolded part sounds really weird. Change admirer to lover, and then change "Since childhood, Ronald was a nature lover" in the second paragraph to, "Since childhood, Ronald has had...".
You already stated that he was born in Maysel in the first paragraph. No need to repeat that it's his hometown.
Overall, sounds like an interesting artist! Add some quotes from him, and maybe add some links to his work as well so that we can see his landscape paintings.
I love the length of this piece.
The style in which it is written: 'Though he was doing good and this job paid him well...' So casual, but it works so well.
After reading the piece, I realise how informative it is. I like the way in which you combine the facts with your own opinion: 'A painter from the rural landscapes of Maysel, West Virginia, Ronald Raevsky is truly a maestro in landscape art.'
The title of the work was caught my eye, and I am glad I read it because there is nothing else like it I have seen.
Really enjoyed reading it. Good job.