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  • Poetry » General, General Re: adventurera

    I like this, i really like this. It's a nice short little poem about life and it's pretty good for it's length. I like the way you were able to ...

    May 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Flames

    This is an interesting poem. The first thing that I noticed is that the poem isn't really in the format that I see a lot of this sight. You know ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Inside/Outside

    I see the point of this point of the poem for the most part. I Mean I assume you're wrtiting about how women are pigen held in this sexist form ...

    May 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Growing

    This poem is pretty good in my opinion. It starts off normal but ends with a nice a cheerful ending. I like it and it even encourages other writer's to ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why did you?

    Hell there just here to do a small review. So this is a poem about love. Well it's interesting and somewhat unique, most love poems normally talk about being in ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Unreasonable Wars

    Alright hello, I'm just here to do a little review. Now this is pretty good in my opinion, it highlights the problems with teens facing this problem. It kind of ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Will Stand

    Hello, just here to do a little review. I honestly like this poem here. It's not a subject that I personally see a lot. I like the fact that you ...

    Aug 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: I Like This House

    Wow, this is pretty interesting. I honestly didn't expect that ending at all. I originally thought the character was just a stubborn/ crazy person living in the house but you ...

    Jun 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Trying To Write

    I like this, I like this a lot. It's simple, short and extremely related able to just about everyone on the site. The poem kind of conveys what it's like ...

    Jun 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Black Fire - Chapter 1

    Hello there just going to give you a little review. This story seem pretty alright so far in my opinion. The problem seems pretty simple but it looks like it's ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.

    hello here just here to give you a little review here. So far this story seems to be rather interesting so far. I personally like it so, the start pretty ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapter 1

    Hello, just going to do a little Review here. I honestly liked this story so far, I personally don't read a lot military/war based story's on here but you've really ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Him

    hello just going to do a small review. First off i like the title of the poem it's pretty simple and it also sets up the story nicely. I honestly ...

    Oct 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Daddy

    Wow. This story toke a TURN. I thought that you wrote just a normal story about a little girl and her dad but fooled me. Nice twist, this story is ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: Hawkward

    Well this was an interesting little string of jokes. I don't really hear bird jokes and friend zone jokes jokes in the same fashion. So this new and quite unique ...

    Aug 10, 2014


The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone