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Re: adventurera
I like this, i really like this. It's a nice short little poem about life and it's pretty good for it's length. I like the way you were able to ...
May 19, 2017 -
Re: Flames
This is an interesting poem. The first thing that I noticed is that the poem isn't really in the format that I see a lot of this sight. You know ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Inside/Outside
I see the point of this point of the poem for the most part. I Mean I assume you're wrtiting about how women are pigen held in this sexist form ...
May 7, 2016 -
Re: Growing
This poem is pretty good in my opinion. It starts off normal but ends with a nice a cheerful ending. I like it and it even encourages other writer's to ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Why did you?
Hell there just here to do a small review. So this is a poem about love. Well it's interesting and somewhat unique, most love poems normally talk about being in ...
Nov 9, 2015 -
Re: Unreasonable Wars
Alright hello, I'm just here to do a little review. Now this is pretty good in my opinion, it highlights the problems with teens facing this problem. It kind of ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: I Will Stand
Hello, just here to do a little review. I honestly like this poem here. It's not a subject that I personally see a lot. I like the fact that you ...
Aug 13, 2015 -
Re: I Like This House
Wow, this is pretty interesting. I honestly didn't expect that ending at all. I originally thought the character was just a stubborn/ crazy person living in the house but you ...
Jun 19, 2015 -
Re: Trying To Write
I like this, I like this a lot. It's simple, short and extremely related able to just about everyone on the site. The poem kind of conveys what it's like ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Black Fire - Chapter 1
Hello there just going to give you a little review. This story seem pretty alright so far in my opinion. The problem seems pretty simple but it looks like it's ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
hello here just here to give you a little review here. So far this story seems to be rather interesting so far. I personally like it so, the start pretty ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hello, just going to do a little Review here. I honestly liked this story so far, I personally don't read a lot military/war based story's on here but you've really ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: Him
hello just going to do a small review. First off i like the title of the poem it's pretty simple and it also sets up the story nicely. I honestly ...
Oct 12, 2014 -
Re: Daddy
Wow. This story toke a TURN. I thought that you wrote just a normal story about a little girl and her dad but fooled me. Nice twist, this story is ...
Aug 10, 2014 -
Re: Hawkward
Well this was an interesting little string of jokes. I don't really hear bird jokes and friend zone jokes jokes in the same fashion. So this new and quite unique ...
Aug 10, 2014
