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  • Poetry » General, General Re: adventurera

    I like this, i really like this. It's a nice short little poem about life and it's pretty good for it's length. I like the way you were able to ...

    May 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Flames

    This is an interesting poem. The first thing that I noticed is that the poem isn't really in the format that I see a lot of this sight. You know ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Inside/Outside

    I see the point of this point of the poem for the most part. I Mean I assume you're wrtiting about how women are pigen held in this sexist form ...

    May 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Growing

    This poem is pretty good in my opinion. It starts off normal but ends with a nice a cheerful ending. I like it and it even encourages other writer's to ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why did you?

    Hell there just here to do a small review. So this is a poem about love. Well it's interesting and somewhat unique, most love poems normally talk about being in ...

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Unreasonable Wars

    Alright hello, I'm just here to do a little review. Now this is pretty good in my opinion, it highlights the problems with teens facing this problem. It kind of ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Will Stand

    Hello, just here to do a little review. I honestly like this poem here. It's not a subject that I personally see a lot. I like the fact that you ...

    Aug 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: I Like This House

    Wow, this is pretty interesting. I honestly didn't expect that ending at all. I originally thought the character was just a stubborn/ crazy person living in the house but you ...

    Jun 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Trying To Write

    I like this, I like this a lot. It's simple, short and extremely related able to just about everyone on the site. The poem kind of conveys what it's like ...

    Jun 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Black Fire - Chapter 1

    Hello there just going to give you a little review. This story seem pretty alright so far in my opinion. The problem seems pretty simple but it looks like it's ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.

    hello here just here to give you a little review here. So far this story seems to be rather interesting so far. I personally like it so, the start pretty ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapter 1

    Hello, just going to do a little Review here. I honestly liked this story so far, I personally don't read a lot military/war based story's on here but you've really ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Him

    hello just going to do a small review. First off i like the title of the poem it's pretty simple and it also sets up the story nicely. I honestly ...

    Oct 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Daddy

    Wow. This story toke a TURN. I thought that you wrote just a normal story about a little girl and her dad but fooled me. Nice twist, this story is ...

    Aug 10, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: Hawkward

    Well this was an interesting little string of jokes. I don't really hear bird jokes and friend zone jokes jokes in the same fashion. So this new and quite unique ...

    Aug 10, 2014


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