theironnovelist

hey there! I'll just review this quick here...cuz i can. at first i wasn't a big fan of the rhyme scheme, but as I read on I saw it wrapped ...

hello. my, this review is late. i'm so sorry. So I really like the idea you have going here. Definitely can see ideas you've taken from other authors, but you're ...

oooh I always like a twist ending. Like the stanzas and formatting too! I have little to suggest other than more imagery- more of an abstract approach, perhaps? It definitely ...

Nice ending! I like the twist you're initiating in the story and character-on-character conflict among your MC's. It ignites tension and you get to see their true colors. You also ...

Well...I may never eat potatoes again. What a creative little piece! I must say, the content is great. I can see many age varieties appealing to this. A few nitpicks ...

Well, I've never reviewed something quite like this before. The thing that confused me a bit is that it seems so somber and serious at first...which, the topic is...but you ...

I like the twist of storytelling and dialogue at the end! Really I absolutely love the thing as a whole, but I have a few suggestions as far as rearranging ...

soo...much....poetry....reviewing.... Please don't ever call your works-in-the-making stupid...every work has potential and every masterpiece has improvement to be done! I think your message is pretty

Chilling! I love a good horror writing...heehee Love the format and love the word choices. I think you're all good here. I might add a comma after 'children crying' in ...

Hey! Last one in the Green Room! I hope I can get this done before someone else does! Okay so I have to be honest, I haven't read your other ...

I personally love the flow of this poem and the way you've lined it up. I think it's pretty perfect in that sense. It would definitely make sense to break ...

herro there This almost sounds like lyrics or a rap, to be honest. I would have liked to see this broken into shorter stanzas somehow. Your choosing. The biggest standout ...

BAHAHAHA Oh my word I saw this was so popular and thought 'there's no way it's that good- it's a comedy!' But holy shoot that was funny. I feel REALLY ...

aww how cute! I love that this can be for anyone, not so specific. I love it overall. A few minor suggestions: 'this is a poem, that much is true' ...

I love your blend of spiritual and natural elements in this piece! I can't fault you on any word choice, I really like it all. The only thing I'd say ...