theironnovelist

The best thing about this poem was definitely your use of symbolism and personification. A little different at the end, and I suspect there's a deeper meaning here, but nevertheless ...

WELCOME TO YWS!!! I think you're getting the idea of what poetry is all about. The only issue here is conventions. You capitalize words that aren't necessary and space things ...

I absolutely love the structure of this poem!! I'm critiqued often on my poem structured like this, but it's so symbolic! I thin it's an important part of the art. ...

I absolutely love studying and researching mind disorders like manic depressive disorder. Alongside with writing it's my #1 choice career at the moment. I love what you've done here. and ...

I do appreciate this comical twist on what a teacher might think. You did a good job of using aspects we as students might not imagine and you used different ...

I don't find this very cheesy at all...love does what it does, and sometimes cliches are what comes out of us because of it. That being said, you've found a ...

Love the rhyme, rhythm, and structure of this poem! I have to say it has a FEW cliches that are often found in poetry...but they're not overused and you balance ...

Very raw and thought-provoking. A good poem makes you read twice! Some people might find this too difficult to understand and accuse you of stringing together random phrases, but I ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS!!! I haven't read any of these reviews (I know, I'm horrible...) so I apologize if I repeat what's already been said. I'm just gonna dive ...

So I think the other reviewers here covered the majority of issues in the poem. I want to talk about something other than the content: the title. I'm a big ...

@SnazzyPencil is right...this is plagiarism of the poem Colorblind just written recently... YWS is a place to write original work. If you like the poem, maybe write a response or ...

WELCOME TO YWS!!! I. Love. Poetry. I write it often, and let me say I appreciate a powerful poem that gets its point across in a way like this. Poetry ...

Okay I felt the need to say this quick-- I haven't really read this series but now that I see it's finished I am so proud and in awe! I ...

hello there:) I think this poem would actually make a great rap. Maybe you should fine-tune stuff and make it a song. That'd be cool. So things I like: it's ...

the structure of this poem looks nice, as is the rhyming scheme and rhythm. the one thing I'm not too keen on is the 'generic-ness' of this poem. it's beautifully ...