thegirlwhowrites

Really nice poem! I very much enjoyed reading it :) I've hardly ever come across Acrostic poems, especially on YWS, and I believe you wrote yours exceptionally well. Especially because ...

Honestly, I did not expect a diary entry to be so well-written... I'm really impressed and taken by surprise! I can tell that you are a really good writer. :D ...

Hi! I really liked your story, original and unlike anything I've read here on YWS. I think one of the things you executed exceptionally well in your piece is the ...

That was so incredibly written! I loved it! Really looking forward to more, I'm serious! :D I especially love how you let the reader enter into your story in the ...

Cool story, I want to know what will happen! Just a few nitpicks I found: It was a calm balmy evening. The sun was setting behind the old mossy trees ...

Oooh, cool, I really enjoyed your poem :) You have an excellent imagination, I would've never thought to write such a poem and I can tell you're a great writer ...

Oh my gosh! Haha, loved the ending! Just a couple suggestions: After taking a few sips of tea, she started to get agitated. “John!“ She said with an annoyed voice, ...

Oh my gosh! That is such a heartbreaking poem!! I think you wrote it quite effectively, letting the reader feel varied emotions throughout your poem. For example, at first I ...

Hi! girlwhowrites here to give suggestions and hopefully helpful feedback! First of all, you need to review your story and add in paragraph breaks! You should never insert one big ...

Wow. That reaaaalllyyyy struck me, well done. What a brilliant plot twsit, you were really able to create such a massive effect on the reader. Shock. Confusion. Bewilderment. As Jessheeran ...

Niiiiiice... :D I love poems which have rhythm and a beat to it; they sound in my mind like lyrics of a song, and in your case a beautiful love ...

Oh wow, I absolutely did not expect the ending... Love it when writers make their pieces unpredictable. Well done. The imagery created in your poem is described brilliantly and you ...

Hi, This is the second piece I read from you and once again... I loved it! When I started reading it I had forgotten about the title; so it wasn't ...

Wow, You have a gift with metaphors and I am truly and irrevocably jealous. ;) Everything you wrote in this piece had such depth to it I was reading it ...

Hi, I like the idea of your poem, really original, never read anything like it and that's really important when it comes to writing. However, I think you could take ...