thecolorofthesky

Hi there! This was a very intriguing read. To star, I think some punctuation is necessary in this piece. It ran into itself, so it could use a little clarity ...

Hi there! It's thecolorofthesky with a review. I'm surprised no one else has reviewed this amazing work yet. I love everything about this piece. It's exceptionally unique and well thought ...

Hi there! This is a poem unlike any other I have read. The entire story is beautifully written from a unique perspective. Your punctuation and flow are all stunning. The ...

Hey there friend! I'm definitely not disappointed with this poem. Your poetry has a distinct and mesmerizing style to it. The first stanza is golden and humorous. The first two ...

Hi there! I like a lot of the descriptions you use in this as well as your word choice. I only have a few suggestions. The poem is pretty polished ...

This is very inspiring. Your poem provides much needed comfort to people. Everyone can feel this poem in some way. I've read other pieces you've wrote and I really enjoy ...

Hi there! I'll be writing a review for you. First, you have some very useful evidence that fits your arguments. In your introduction however, you show a slight bias in ...

Hi there! To start I fell in love (or lust) with the structure and topic. I only have a few suggestions otherwise. The line "Of the portion of love (or ...

The poem is simple yet relatable. Your word choice is nice, prominently in the phrase "Every thought I think is tinged with you,". The line gives an insight to the ...

Hi there! To start, you chose an attention catching title. A small revision to the story would to write you Sergeant and Lieutenant. You might take into consideration replacing the ...

Your story is very unique and well put together. It also has potential to become more. It is clear you have thoughts on issues such as justice. You portray a ...

This poem, although brief, carries a deep message. It really encompasses the essence of life. You also address a prominent theme of choice. My mantra towards art has always been ...

This is a masterpiece. The use of dots to break up sections really emphasizes the work. The content and perspective itself is unique. Your use of well known phrases, ideas, ...

This is absolutely fabulous! I adore the concept of this story. The rhyming and phrasing really works well for and audience of children. When I got into reading it I ...

Hi there! I'm don't usually write stories but I have a few comments. First off, I really enjoy the concept of this story, especially that its aimed for kids. I ...