thePoeToaster43

The words and the meaning are truly beautiful... but Grammar was lacking. (which I don't really care about, because I'm one to purposefully going against the rules with grammar.) There ...

This is an amazing story. In a way, it felt incredibly long, yet too short. I Love your use of imagery! The story line was fantastic, and I was pulled ...

As a poem, it's actually very artistic. I couldn't do it with the music thingy (My mom would hear it, and I'm not supposed to be on this late.) But, ...

I didn't have to read very far to know that I loved this. Whether it be a song or a poem, it's absolutely fantastic. I couldn't decide what kind of ...

Oh, I am most definitely confused by this piece. I get the concept, not the point. Why post this here? Perhaps in an attempt to get more young writers to ...

This kind of makes me sad... It makes me think of the future, when my sister will start to pick up on my depression... Will she try to share my ...

Interesting. Very interesting, if I may say so. It gives of a sort of "dark" feeling, but at the same time it is absolutely splendid. I have to admit that ...

Do you like music? I get the feeling you like music... Anyways, a few problems with this. (and by that I mean I have a few problems with it, not ...

Let me just say that it's nearly always worth it. My favorite Line would have to be "You wake up, and realize it was just a dream." Something about that ...

I liked this. I can't figure out the meaning. Which is good, I love to be left thinking! I like that it's short. (As many say "short and sweet".) (Or ...

I almost cried, because I've been fighting to describe the same feeling for years upon years, and you've just... got it. I'm honestly beyond jealousy with this piece. Tell me, ...

I dislike this in a way that makes me like it. ^that is a compliment^ It really describes the feeling of reading a good book. I do have to agree ...

Wow, thanks for that. Making me tear up and feel "EMOTIONS". I love the way this was constructed. As if the words weren't enough, the structure pulled it all together. ...

Touching. Seems almost repetitive in two ways. The way you intended... And repetitive in the way it squeezes the sorrows from their little compact spot in my heart. Dearest Emma, ...

This reminds me of the kind of creation a great poet like Suess would've made. I love the fact that it's short. I feel as if the thought is there. ...