thePoeToaster43

The poem was very romantic, and almost sad. I feel as if you were trying to tell him how fragile you already are, without sounding needy. I wouldn't exactly say ...

I honestly don't know why I love this poem as much as I do. It seems to fall between simplistic and complex, in such a way that i can't explain. ...

I loved the basic concept of this poem. It was well thought out, and creative. I understand that this is an actual form of poetry, and you've worked with it ...

Short and sweet. I like that. The writing style reminds me of the kind of poetry an elementary school teacher would read to her students. But that's not a bad ...

Maybe its because I've been in your position many times before, but this poem rings a chord somewhere deep in my heart. Losing a best friend can be one of ...

I really like this poem. It's a topic that I personally struggle to write about, simply because it's hard to word. I'm glad somebody has found the inspiration to finally ...

The last line really brings it together. I simply love the way it ended. In fact, I love it all the way it is. I love the way you've taken ...

Despite the fact that this is a beautiful thing to write about, I can't really see it as a poem. I kind of see it as a nice, quick story. ...

I honestly can't figure out exactly why I like this. The title is beautiful in itself. And although it's the city of dreams, I totally believe it could describe a ...

While I get the concept, I don't feel as if I have a true understanding of this piece. I think it'd be a bit better if you'd capitalize every first ...

Haha, I don't know if you intended it, but you have a good bit of humor here! I love the line "It's no Charleston or Carlton." That would probably be ...

Did you mean to write "please use a latrine and do not feed with animals." ? I kind of feel as if it should be something like "Please use a ...

Other than a few grammatical errors that need to be revised, this is truly a fantastic piece. I do suggest you go back and advise your grammar, like lack of ...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I love the humor you've brought to the table. I'm not one to care for 'funny' poems, but this is kind of brilliant. I love how it's almost written ...

Hello there fellow poet, it's thePoeToaster43 here, with a review of this piece. At first, I wasn't feeling it as a rhyming poem. I thought it would've been better if ...