Hewo, I'm back for another review.
I really liked this dark poem. I really relate to this on a spiritual level and I just loved the way you put it into words.
I do want to say that there was a mistake, 21 lines down when you say, "The is no hope for me." I am pretty sure it is supposed to be, "There." Forgive me if I am wrong but,, I loved the way it flows and I just, agh, I just don't know how to put it into the correct words.
I am so very sorry for being a weirdo, anyways, I will just sum it up since I suck ass at talking. I really liked your poem and I really hope you keep writing because it truly was wonderful.
Much love,
Jade
Points: 545
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