sunlightwarriorxo

Hey! I love this poem - the language, imagery and themes are truly beautiful! You feel as though you're there by a firelight watching and feeling every emotion that you ...

Hey! This is a great song - I love your language and imagery. You really hit the full emotional impact of your title. My only suggestion for refining/editing would be ...

Hi, These are a good couple of chapters - you've used good imagery and language choices to convey the emotions you want too, however I feel as though in Chapter ...

Hi! What an interesting poem - you certainly explore the importance of decision well, however, if you wanted to explore the concept in its full dimensions, I would advise making ...

Hi! This is truly an amazing song, my only suggestion of improvement is with the line: "You think you're so bold" you could possibly change it too: "Your love's gone ...

Hi! This is a great chapter you have here - your language, imagery and speech all convey the emotional impact of the situation so well done on that! For your ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! You have some interesting ideas - this is a very intriguing piece you've wrote here. It definitely makes you want to find out more and ...

Hi! This is a beautiful poem - you should be very proud of this work. I am in love with the imagery you've used, it makes you feel as though ...

This is truly a fantastic poem. You have captured all dimensions of a toxic relationship fantastically here. I love the use of your language and imagery - it really allows ...

Hi, These are an interesting collection of poems. You definitely have some really interesting ideas, however personally, its not clear where the imagery and themes are going, maybe this could ...

Hi! A good poem - but I think to hit the full intended effect, refining it could be very beneficial. For example: Staring into the glass mirror, The feeling just ...

Hi! This is a good song - there's great imagery and descriptive language. However, I feel as though the ideas and emotions can be elaborated upon - if you choose ...

Hi! What an interesting collection of poetry! My favourite one is is Sleepy Town MD, I love the imagery, you feel as though you're there, wondering around and exploring the ...

Hi! Your imagery is fantastic! You feel as though you're immersed within the speakers feelings and thoughts, and that's something which I'm still learning to do (as a poet), so ...

Hey! This is a great song. It's a beautifully balanced blend of emotion and an underlying sense of darkness, however personally for me to be able to achieve the full ...