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Your Love's Gone Cold

by AngelLily


Your love's gone cold

Now I've got no one to hold

You went with the stars

You left me with scars

Ooooh

Feeling helpless

Stuck in the deepness

I can't defeat this

Ooooh

Your love, yeah

Your love's gone cold

Your love, yeah

You think you're so bold

Your love, yeah

Your love's gone cold

Your love, yeah

You think you're so bold

I stay up all night

Tryin' to make it right

I'm feeling the fear

You left me here

Ooooh

Every day

I pray

For a better walk

Among this disarray

Your love, yeah

Your love's gone cold

Your love, yeah

You think you're so bold

Your love, yeah

Your love's gone cold

Your love, yeah

You think you're so bold

Your love's gone cold

Now I've got no one to hold

I just got sold

You left me for gold

Ooooh

Yeah...your love's gone cold


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Sat Feb 06, 2021 4:45 pm
sunlightwarriorxo wrote a review...



Hi!
This is truly an amazing song, my only suggestion of improvement is with the line:
"You think you're so bold" you could possibly change it too:
"Your love's gone cold,
Memories and visions unfold,
"You're love's gone cold,
Is this the future they foretold?" - if you want to deliver a hardhitting and emotional impact - as i'm sure you intend too, with your song but other than that, it's brilliant! :)
Keep writing :)




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Sat Feb 06, 2021 7:20 am
Annajwa says...



i love this lyrics, thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!




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Fri Feb 05, 2021 1:10 pm
Haileyg21 wrote a review...



HIYO! hailey here for a review! THis song is amazing! like honestly! I got chills reading it!

"I'm feeling the fear

You left me here"

This part had so many feelings running through me because of how you placed it in the song. Its so well put together. Its worded amazing and the emotions off of this is insane. I loved this and want to say thank you for writing this and having the courage to share it with YWS's community! thank you.




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Fri Feb 05, 2021 4:15 am
Nightingale06 says...



Nice lyrics......they are pretty meaningful......go ahead and make an actual song.............I really liked the following lines
"You went with the stars and left me with scars"
"Stuck in the deepness I can't defeat this"
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