sunlightwarriorxo

This is a great short story - there's great dialogue, it's easy to see the direction of the piece and I loved the fact how you've personified the natural elements ...

This is a great poem - you really explore the value of friendship and the different motions that it goes through. I love the language and imagery that you've used ...

What a poignant and beautifully crafted poem - your language and imagery have captured the feeling of 2020, now including early 2021 really well. Your writing shows a high amount ...

This is a great poem - as an A Level Student I can highly relate to this - online lessons, especially when you've done the prep, and know the content ...

Wow - this is a very emotional poem that you have here - I love your language and imagery, you really immerse the reader within the dancers thoughts and feelings ...

This is another great chapter - your writer strengths become more evident as you contribue more and more, so well done! However, there seems to be a reccuring theme - ...

Hi, I really enjoyed reading this :) - you show more and more potential as a writer through each chapter with your: description and characterisation so well done! however, i ...

Hi, Your language is fantastic - you've crafted a deeply emotional poem here, which is really good. My only suggestions for edits would be: Let's run away from here, Away ...

Hi, This is a very good chapter - your language, characterisation, dialogue and description is very good, however the interaction between Marie and Principal seems to be very long, and ...

Hi, This is a great follow up chapter - your language and imagery give a strong foundation for the emotions that you're trying to convey, however my tips (suggested of ...

Wow! This is a great poem - you definitely show how popularity isn't always as fantastic as people think it is - which in fact links to my own YA ...

Hi! What an interesting, unique and beautifully crafted poem. I love the fact you've used numbers to link each line, that is really clever so well done! You explore mental ...

Hi, Wow, this is a beautiful poem - your language and imagery are brilliant! However, personally for me, if you choose to edit and refine the poem, I feel as ...

Hi! Wow, this surely is a great poem you have here, I love the language and imagery that you've used - you really explore emotional dimensions of what it feels ...

What a beautiful poem! You truly convey the all the feelings and emotions felt with silence and show the effects that a choice to remain quiet can have, upon you ...