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Hii ! Here for a quick review. The poem is short and to the point ( I like it) but I guess you could have added more points. As the ...

heyyy !! THATS A REALLY BEAUTIFUL POEM. would love to know your inspiration/ source of this idea. According to me words placement is so so good. I see when you ...

hiii @SMulki! a short, lovely poem indeed. uh...still would have been better if more words were added ( just my opinion) Can improve in vocabulary, just try to add new ...

Hii ! That's a lovely poem. I am in short of words right now..how to comment about yours Well, vocabulary is really good like each and every line holds deep ...

OH HI ! A nice short story, I loved the way you began your writing "I could never forget the day I laid my eyes on him" That actually caught ...

Hiii ! it's a REALLY AMAZING poem !! its relatable kind of..the way you tried to show both the faces of his was demn good. Very suitable words are used ...

Hello @julia002 ! just here to drop a short review. Ya its a good poem! I loved the mixture of " aggressively in love" if it is somehow related to ...

hi @KaavyaK .......i can really relate to you... but i just think...the last part got messed up..a little off from the point. otherwise...the poem is really a good one and ...

hi there! went through your writing....nice thought though...some words i found really to be appropriate to use in certain sentences. but just a suggestion...you could have maintained a does not ...

hey, nightshadows... Again a very amazing poem........the way you started '"Life goes on I will survive," is absolutely a perfect way to start . I just noticed that you write ...

hey, nightshadows Its a lovely poem! I loved the way you started.....and the way you ended. "Dear the one I fell for...." is a very nice way to start a ...

Hello, Yoshikrab Welcome to YWS! I loved your poem! A nice topic indeed ! Albatross! a poem based on the life and freeness of a bird. I dont know why ...

hii Via, I am here to review your poem . The topic and theme is a good one but i did not understand this part : "They jostle back and ...

Hello Sly, Welcome to YWS.... I really enjoyed your was amazing....that the fact someone was knocking from the next room....although no one lives there . Well I am fond of ...

hi itsshreyatripathi, heyyy...this poem is really great! its each every line is so amazing .... "I too want friends , Who gives surprises. But those I get, Leave me at ...