Hello,
just thought I'd leave a review. Immaculate poem, genuinely- the rhymes sound unique and impactful, really getting your message across. The allegories that resemble contradictions of the omnipotence of perhaps God/an energy force (I assume?) and the natural imagery further heightens the pronounced flaws that spirituality may have. Few criticisms for this, however perhaps add more detail to the second part?
Please keep publishing these, they are incredible.
Thank you
Points: 42
Reviews: 19
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