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Re: Light and nature
Heyy there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :))) The imagery was great, and I love the way you put some things, like "It’s a mistake to think that you are ...
Mar 6, 2021 -
Re: Time Traveler's Dilemma
Heyy, stygianmoon17 here for a review
Mar 6, 2021 -
Re: I drove by your old house today.
Ahh I have no words. There's such a bittersweetness in this poem, and the times where she recalls her past, you feel it with her. There's this great feel of ...
Mar 4, 2021 -
Re: Day and Night
Hey there, stygiamoon17 here for a review :) I actually thought you were a guy at first, complaining about his ex or something, but then that line of "sisters work ...
Mar 4, 2021 -
Re: Please forgive me, I've got demons in my head
Wow You described how it feels to have emotion and DID in such a grand way. The emotions are just so crude and real here.. I felt how overwhelmed you ...
Mar 4, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)
Heyy there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :) I really enjoyed reading this chapter and I'll stay tuned for those who come along, this sounds so interesting !! MINUsES There's ...
Mar 4, 2021 -
Re: The Sound of Silence
Heyy, stygianmoon17 here for a review :) First off, god you scared me. I thought this would be an essay on the ACTUAL song "The sound silence". The one where ...
Mar 3, 2021 -
Re: Can You Decode This?
ooh neat I love this kind of thing :P I'll try out a few things to see if they can decode this: 1- ifud hf nh yeah okay no keeping ...
Mar 3, 2021 -
Re: hurricane
hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :)) For your question, this is not exaaaaaaaactly a prose poem. More like a.. paragraph poem..? let's just say it's freestyle
Mar 2, 2021 -
Re: Deathly silence
Heyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :P First off.. GOD those last lines struck hard. It's the point isn't it ? For a poem to leave a lasting feeling. And ...
Mar 2, 2021 -
Re: test 1-2-28-2021
this is actually more alarming than a horror story. I just can't seem to get you. Is this a test because you want to see how posting works ? (In ...
Mar 2, 2021 -
Re: The Pink Glove
Hey there :D stiggy here for a review ^^ Let's play a game, I have to guess what the prompt is. I'm just hoping it's not one of those impossible ...
Mar 1, 2021 -
Re: Eating Me Alive
heyyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :) There are one or two things I wanted to mention about this short before moving on to why it's great. First, the sound. ...
Mar 1, 2021 -
Re: Youth
Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review
Feb 21, 2021 -
Re: Fantasy
hey there ! stygianmoon17 here for a review
Feb 20, 2021