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Hello! Sarah here! Okay, so I really do like this poem. It's got a kind of dark tone to it, which I always really love to see displayed in poetry ...

Hello! Sarah here! Okay, this is definitely an exceptional poem and you create an exquisite picture in just a few lines. However, I feel as though some of those lines ...

I like this. I really, really do. This poem really is the symptomatic of "sometimes less is better" because you just get the point across in a snap, which is ...

I adore this. This entire poem - it's so original and simple, and you have a little "ohhh" moment at the end when you finally get it! I can tell ...

Ah, I like this! It's very simple and very sweet. The thought of going on an adventure with someone, whoever they are, is an interesting idea you played with (and ...

Hi there! This is a nice little piece you got here, but I do seriously believe it does need some touching up, in which case it could be much more ...

Ohh, I really like this - the flow you have is excellent, and I just love the idea behind the poem (it sounds like the "lady" is actually a villainess? ...

Hi Jiggity! Storyisking here with a review! So. I actually really, really love this - and I think one of the reasons I do is because of how many times ...

Hi Twit! storyisking here with a review! This is an absolutely gorgeous, stunning piece. I love the effect this poem had on me - the concept is so simple and ...

Hello dasiamari! storyisking here, delivering a review! Okay, first off: I really like the idea of this poem. As dog already states, the idea of death being a playmate is ...

Hey there, Jiggity! storyisking delivering a review! I'm still relatively new with these, so some face-palming at my incoherent thoughts maybe be expected. Anywho. First off: While it's already been ...

Hello there, Dancer! This was an enjoyable poem to read-at least it was for me. I like how it tackles the idea of life sometimes seeming like nothing but a ...

I have to say, honestly - I am very impressed with your writing. You evidently have a true talent for taking words and putting them together in sentences that usually ...

This is a very nice and simple piece; I liked it. I'm not completely sure if you this was your initial goal, but I kind of got the feeling that ...