Hello my name is Kyla, and I'm here to leave you a review.
I really like this poem you have, it is very sweet and heartwarming. I do see some punctuations that can be corrected but it still flows; It still has a meaning and an ease to it. I really do enjoy the simplicity. You are staying on track; This piece is basically going in one direction. It is as if the narrator is speaking to someone as well as describing the love, and that is a good thing. I love the tone it has to it, like someone is actually reading it to me. My opinion might not count seeing as how I am young, but I still hope you enjoy my review to an extent.
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