spottedpebble

chem, your poems always make me want to cry (in a good way)

Originally written May 1st, 2026 I've been unsure about how to edit this work to make it sound better, so now I'm posting it here for some feedback. Here are ...

This is truly amazing and so full of feeling. I like the unique way you referenced war and equated the conflict with strong worries toward a loved one, as well ...

i love the word perhaps

I still think about this poem all the time

I really love this and I think the picture you used as the cover matches the poem perfectly!

I stumbled upon this somehow almost 20 years later and I cannot believe it doesn't have any likes! You'll probably never see this comment, but I'd like to let you ...

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story if you decide to post it! ^^ The concept is so interesting and I like the suspenseful way you ...

I don't have time to write a review right now but I would like to make a comment. I am enthralled by this poem. It feels like a photograph in ...

the lore for this ship is so cool :O

This made me cry

This is an interesting concept, and definitely something that I'd be interested in reading!

Introspection is a fluid thing like water. Look into your reflection in that water. Watch the ripples break it into pieces. There is so much to know about the things ...

I really like the concept of someone's unwanted and unneeded apologies taking form as a sharpie scrawl on a monument to the person's hapiness :O This is so good.

I, too, crave more