Young Writers Society

Thanks for the review and the advice about the tone! I'll keep that in mind. (also I love the style of your review and all the colors)

I feel this.

Thanks! Your feedback on the punctuation is very helpful, and I will adjust that now. :)

Written 10/5/23.

Such a clever comparison. Halloween and the Internet.

Thanks, those suggestions are extremely helpful! I've never written a horror story like this before, so I'll keep your suggestions in mind for next time I try to write a ...

Thanks! You really understood the poem and I'm glad that you were able to see that the "community of like-minded people" is YWS.

*Presses like times twenty*

This is awesome!!

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Thank you so much! ^v^ Also, I noticed that you tried to include a quote. If you want your quote to look like this insert quote here , put [quote*]insert ...

Sorry it took so long for me to reply, but I love your review! Thanks!

Thank you!

This is a true story. The real thing was on 10/11/23, I published it right after writing it and wrote it right after living it. Fun times after school, fun ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! This poem could be interpreted in many different ways, and like with most of my poems, what it's about is purely ...