sphealwithit

Sphealwithit here... God do I know that feeling :c Sitting there in an exam and having no clue what to write even if you think you know the answer. Anyway, ...

Sphealwithit here.... This poem confused me at the start but eventually I think I understand it. The tone definitely seems sombre with a hint of longing I was reading it ...

Sphealwithit here... Seriously how did you get so good at writing?! It's so not fair Anyways, I love the voice considering you said you were a polar bear you do ...

Sphealwithit here.... This is amazing, you have a talent for writing thats for sure :) It almost made me cry it's so sad, I see nothing that went wrong including ...

Hi Sphealwithit here.... This chapter is great and really funny. It flows really well. You have a great imaginiation :) There were some cute moments which I can never write ...

Hi Sphealwithit here.... This is a good poem :) I like the structure and general layout. I do not have a very strict mother (I would personally call mine protective) ...

Sphealwithit here.... Wow. This is amazing. It's really powerful emotionally. The language and descriptions are spot on and it really feels as if you know this feeling well (not to ...

Sphealwithit here..... Wow. Finally someone who feels the same way i do! To be honest, i think everyone needs a good rant every now and then, it's just that people ...

Sphealwithit here... I liked this poem. It's lyrical (to me anyway). There are a few errors here that i wont waste your time with but I will say read through ...

Sphealwithit here... I can relate to this so much ... I have issues with people, mostly not being able to talk to them. I'm in my last year of secondary ...

Sphealwithit here.. I love doctor who and I really like this poem It's really well written, especially the whole war doctor thing. The use of no more made it feel ...

Sphealwithit here.... This is a really good mix of old and new :) Shakespeare that is easy to read I will take that any day. It actually made me lol ...

Sphealwithit here.. This.is.amazing It great what you've written. Bullying is a serious issue and it does need to stop. Reading it actually made me really sad, not many things do ...

Sphealwithit here.... Firstly can I say awwww so cute :) Moving on, i really like this piece. Being a girl I may have a thing for gay guys but it ...

Sphealwithit here.. I like the style, its different. At the start it seems like emo poetry but it was actually pretty good. A bit on the short side but i'm ...