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Re: i tried you on, but you didn't fit.
Hey there Kat here to Review for Team WHY? Can I jut say, metaphors metaphors metaphors similes . I LOVED how each stanza was like it's own little analogy :) ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: show me what it is to speak
Hey there Reviewing for Team WHY? Your works are always so refreshingly unique. This has a very nice visual to it . General, General ?I am not sure if this ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: impression.
Oh wow , here for a review for team WHY? This was a really inspirational poem, just wow . I must say I loved the usage of short sentences, it ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Enter
Happy Review Day ! Go Team WHY? Quick thing, in stanza 2 you could change day to hall and have really nice repetition going on here, all the other stanzas ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Just Some Things I Wanted to Say
Review for Team Why Oh my dear me goodness!!! I can't help it this was so amazingly stickily sweet :D I would give this to the person I love in ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Angel Reaper
Here we go TEAM WHY ! Kat here to review Okay so let me just say I totally adored your descriptors here ! It reminded me of the classic reapers ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: My love
Oh wow look at that ....image ! Hi there Kat here to review~ Hmm very different, very interesting. I really liked the constant rythm though I will be honest, I ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Tomorrow
Hey there Kat here to write a review for you :) Aw you remind me of myself when I was 12. Such a nice piece for someone so young . ...
May 20, 2015 -
Re: My empire
Hey there and welcome to yws ! Kat here to review for you . I love reviewing such fresh new poems :) Okay so one major fix here is the ...
May 16, 2015 -
Re: A Sonnet To War
Hey there Kat here to review . Okay so I have always wanted to write a Shakesperian sonnet but I don't really know much about them so sorry if my ...
May 16, 2015 -
Re: Goodbye, friend.
Hey there Kat here to review . Sorry for any typos I'm reviewing in my phone ! This caught my attention because I lost a good friend just yesterday and ...
May 16, 2015 -
Re: Glass Girl
Wow are you really nine ? That's amazing . I had to review this because it breaks my heart and cuts me deep . It's really emotional and well written ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: Love
Welcome, Welcome, Welcome ! Welcome to YWS. Kat here to reviewww~ So, this a cute sweet little poem you have here , very moving yet still simplistic. The second line ...
May 12, 2015 -
Re: it was her smile
Oh my goodness this was so sad and sweet and EMOTIONAL! Kat here to review :) I agree with everyone else that this was phenonimal and it really pulls at ...
May 12, 2015 -
Re: If I Gave You My Heart
Oh my goodness this was so wonderful I want to like it twice! I have a soft spot for touching not overly sappy love poems like this. It was so ...
May 7, 2015
