sophiesangel

This is a pretty little poem! The speaker is very earnest and devoted to the subject, "Evelyn," expressing their all-consuming love for them. Some of my favorite lines: Words cannot ...

idk how someone hasn't given this a review yet bc this is stunning. the visuals make this poem so so so so fun to read, and they're just beautiful in ...

heyyy there

this is a really pretty and also incredibly devastating and raw piece! i really admired how you used greek mythology to illustrate your point, at times even becoming these mythological ...

This concept is so cool, and was frankly so fun to read. Unfortunately, I did not get through much of the piece, because it was rather long (not a bad ...

this made me shudder in the best possible way yk? i have synesthesia, so here we go... this poem felt violent blue and sickly green, like something rotting from the ...

This piece is really, really emotional and evocative. It's passion and pain and regret all mixed together. Really nice job. I really liked how you started each paragraph with "love ...

This is so relatable and real. The formatting (bold and italics especially) draws the reader in and pushes them to keep reading. I love the intro, because it introduces the ...

This may be my favorite pieces I have found on yws so far. I have no suggestions for this piece. If there are any flaws they are so small they ...

This is so specific and haunting in the best type of way possible. The phrase "good bones" is so eatable (if yk what I mean) and it's repetition is so ...

This is. . . unlike any poem I have ever read. The use of modern language in rhyme is truly a feat, and the expression of theme is surprisingly well ...

Wow, this is a great piece! I kinda went line by line with this, just to give you my interpretation and a little bit of feedback for each stanza. "What ...

This is short and sweet, but in the best way. The sparse wording still leaves room for vivid imagery, and the meaning is plain and simple. Some quick notes: Towards ...

This is really good. The rhyme scheme flows really nicely, and reads like an inspiring piece of spoken word poetry. One of my particularly favorite set of lines is "I'm ...

wow,this is so visceral and precise. the imagery you used, such as "it dips curved blade under the breastbone/pulls through the meat exits the pelvic floor" is so vivid and ...