siyasingh

Well, now that you say it i do realize how it could fit in any relationship. thanks for the extra information though.

Thanks for reviewing. I will surely start paying more attention to the points you have mentioned above while writing.

Thanks once again.

Hey its okay you were not harsh. I will try to improve.

Thanks for reading my story. There will definitely be more chapter ahead.

oops! Sorry i didn't see that when i was drafting. Thanks for the review.

thank you for pointing out that error.

thank you so much for the encouragement. I am glad you liked it.

Thank you for this wonderful review. Now that you point them out, i realoze my mistakes. I will keep these details in mind next time.

oohh i see. well thanks.

Ohhhhh. Now i get it.

Thanks simran. I am glad you liked it. Are you an Indian?

Hi Sophie. Siya here. So i guess i liked your poem it's sweet and short(not that sweet. huh?). I would like to point out somethings to you. Like you have ...

Thanks a lot again, Adrian. I am really happy you liked it. Questions will be answered in the later chapters ( hopefully). Since i am not a good enough writer ...