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  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Pity Indian Story

    Hey there! Shey here to review this piece! Admittedly, I'm not very familiar with the state India's in, so I can comment much on the content. I can tell this ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: when i walked into the sun

    Hey there! Shey here to review! Reviewsy time! My first comment is the lowercase "i." It's poetry, so you don't technically need to follow grammatical rules. However, usually you break ...

    Mar 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Confessions from the optimistic pessimist

    Hey! Shey is here to review! This was a neat set of three poems, all of which had a cold hard reality theme. However, they were still fun reads, and ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Not Bothering to Zip up My Jacket

    Hey! Shey! Review! I liked this story a lot, so I'm gonna review it. Sacredlege beat me to the major stuff, so I guess I'll just point out some typos ...

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Praise the Lord

    Heyo! Shey here to review this work! I haven't reviewed anything but poetry in a while, and I'd like it if that meant I've been reviewing a lot of poetry ...

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: If This is Thoughts at Night...

    Shey here for a review. Firstly, I'd like to review your username. I like the pun. ;) Now, for a relevant review. This was a great poem, and I must ...

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: ECP

    Hello! Shey here for a review. I really need to get back into the reviewing thing, so let's jump into this! Overall, I enjoyed your poem, and I haven't a ...

    Mar 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Glorious Fantasy Ch.6: A book, a clean, and too many clothes

    Humor's back! And so am I, to review! As I subtly hinted at, the humor is back. I felt that the last chapter lacked the humor I so love about ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Glorious Fantasy Ch.5: Achievements

    Sheyren here to review! So, as I commented last time, humor was a big part of why I liked this story. Now, there wasn't a lot of humor this chapter, ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Glorious Fantasy Ch.4: Out of the Forest

    Shey here to review! Nice story you've got going here! I read the first two, but admittedly skimmed through the third. However, I understand the idea. And it's pretty awesome! ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Literature Re: Love Hurts - An Act of Courage

    Hey, Zelda! Shey here for a review! Time to punch this thing outta the green room. Overall, I thought this was a nice story. It was, however, very essay-like and ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Neoptolemus Pyrrhus

    Hey there! Shey here for a review! I didnt see a whole lot of issues to nitpick... You left out a few spaces after punctuation, but that's small stuff. The ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned

    Hey yo! Shey here to review! (why do I call myself that when reviewing? And why am I asking it now?) Focus. Okay, so this poem. It was really good. ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Famine

    Hola, Aleta! Shey here to review! As for the content of this poem, there's not much to complain about. It had a really perfect rhythm, with little to no phrases ...

    Jan 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Hydraulic Nightmare

    Hey! Shey here for a review! I'm just gonna jump into it. Wow. Dark, but really fun to read. I almost imagined it as a rap, because of the character's ...

    Jan 29, 2017


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