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Re: A Pity Indian Story
Hey there! Shey here to review this piece! Admittedly, I'm not very familiar with the state India's in, so I can comment much on the content. I can tell this ...
Mar 10, 2017 -
Re: when i walked into the sun
Hey there! Shey here to review! Reviewsy time! My first comment is the lowercase "i." It's poetry, so you don't technically need to follow grammatical rules. However, usually you break ...
Mar 9, 2017 -
Re: Confessions from the optimistic pessimist
Hey! Shey is here to review! This was a neat set of three poems, all of which had a cold hard reality theme. However, they were still fun reads, and ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Not Bothering to Zip up My Jacket
Hey! Shey! Review! I liked this story a lot, so I'm gonna review it. Sacredlege beat me to the major stuff, so I guess I'll just point out some typos ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: Praise the Lord
Heyo! Shey here to review this work! I haven't reviewed anything but poetry in a while, and I'd like it if that meant I've been reviewing a lot of poetry ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: If This is Thoughts at Night...
Shey here for a review. Firstly, I'd like to review your username. I like the pun. ;) Now, for a relevant review. This was a great poem, and I must ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: ECP
Hello! Shey here for a review. I really need to get back into the reviewing thing, so let's jump into this! Overall, I enjoyed your poem, and I haven't a ...
Mar 5, 2017 -
Re: Glorious Fantasy Ch.6: A book, a clean, and too many clothes
Humor's back! And so am I, to review! As I subtly hinted at, the humor is back. I felt that the last chapter lacked the humor I so love about ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Glorious Fantasy Ch.5: Achievements
Sheyren here to review! So, as I commented last time, humor was a big part of why I liked this story. Now, there wasn't a lot of humor this chapter, ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Glorious Fantasy Ch.4: Out of the Forest
Shey here to review! Nice story you've got going here! I read the first two, but admittedly skimmed through the third. However, I understand the idea. And it's pretty awesome! ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Love Hurts - An Act of Courage
Hey, Zelda! Shey here for a review! Time to punch this thing outta the green room. Overall, I thought this was a nice story. It was, however, very essay-like and ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Neoptolemus Pyrrhus
Hey there! Shey here for a review! I didnt see a whole lot of issues to nitpick... You left out a few spaces after punctuation, but that's small stuff. The ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Forgive Me Father, for I Have Sinned
Hey yo! Shey here to review! (why do I call myself that when reviewing? And why am I asking it now?) Focus. Okay, so this poem. It was really good. ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Famine
Hola, Aleta! Shey here to review! As for the content of this poem, there's not much to complain about. It had a really perfect rhythm, with little to no phrases ...
Jan 29, 2017 -
Re: Hydraulic Nightmare
Hey! Shey here for a review! I'm just gonna jump into it. Wow. Dark, but really fun to read. I almost imagined it as a rap, because of the character's ...
Jan 29, 2017
