sanju

The poem has different layers of emotion. And there is enough leeway in it for the reader to interpret it in his own way. The small yet meaningful lines perfectly ...

I hope you are not as pronounced and emphatic a rebel as you seem to be in the poem! lol. But seriously, I reading your poem immensely. The contemptuous manner ...

Writing about death, at least codifying it in some way is not an easy job. Your comparison of it to a black lagoon, intoxicating fumes and bursting bubbles is justified ...

The pain seems to come from the core of the heart. The choice of words and rhythm of the poem encases the deep-seated pain of the person. The following lines ...

The imagery of the poem. The feeling of loss has also been vividly portrayed. The good thing about the poem is its economy of words. You have demonstrated that with ...

The connection of the loss of a person to the rain has been evocatively portrayed through the poem. The line breaks need little bit more attention though. But the sadness ...

The imagery is beautiful. The flow of the poem is smooth. You have shown that with simple words, you can create an effective and lasting impression. The rhyming is also ...

Great way to put forward the underlying psychological vacillation in a creative way. That early crush for somebody, the slow infatuation, that unrealized yearnings before you become conscious of it ...

First of all, I must congratulate for thinking about the premise that holds so much of promise. It's really brave and creative to write a poem about this well-known incident. ...

Hi The poem encased the agony of lover lost in a convincing way. I also like the way she fails to recognize her love in the last line. In the ...

Great poem. I had to use the dictionary to find the meaning of 'senescent'. The first couple of lines opens up the tenor of the poem. And then, it moves ...

The poem is highly emotive. This was expected as it talks about love, tears, happiness, family support etc. It is a joy to read it, especially the way you have ...

I liked the rhyming; something that many young poets do not do. I also neither have the capability nor the intent of framing my poems with the rhyming in mind. ...

I like the line 'Denying to stick with the status quo'. It should probably, be 'stick to'. But really liked the line. I loved the ethos of the poem. The ...

It's a very good attempt at penning a poem about the thought. We take our thinking process for granted. The brain and the thousand cells that do it may be ...