I like the line 'Denying to stick with the status quo'. It should probably, be 'stick to'. But really liked the line.
I loved the ethos of the poem. The last but one line really sums up the ignorance of people.
May be the commas at the end of each lines should done away with. The word 'It' sounds repetitive in the lines -
It was said to resemble death and hence,
It was ripped from the ground,
Hence, the second 'It' may be omitted.
Well done.
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