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Re: Humbler Things to Ponder
THE LAST TWO LINES OF THE SECOND LAST PARAGRAPH SEEMS CONFUSING?
Apr 7, 2018 -
Re: Regretting Helen
I like ur name. Lije u i too am a greekbfanatic i would like u to read my new work on cressida.
Nov 21, 2015 -
Re: The One who Can't Love Me
I like your shows the great pain u had when u were departing from ur love.the tears are torned off for you because rthey dont listen uuthey ve become deaf ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: This Girl
This poem is good but too seemsthhat you have gathered a group of romantic dalogues.looking at ur name i realizeed that theres a tricky game in the sexuality.this isvan open ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: You are something I can not touch!
This is a very good poem i hwve a special interest for romantic poems especially those which has a bit of complicated emotions into the begining oof the poem ur ...
Sep 12, 2015 -
Re: Handwriting
I really like the conceptthefactis that the thing you highlighted id a fact.evevln lhavebeen many a times beingsaid fir this. To imprivemy hwndwritung was diffigult as the braundoes not fooperatevwith
Sep 3, 2015 -
Re: the war of the man
thanks my indian brother. my age is actually 17 i have mistakenly specified 96
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: me; noun
what is tihs
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: Life a canvass of oppurtunity
thank u .actually i write everything clearly on ms word. but while i copy it at the publishing center it just get that spacing faults
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: I Will
the poem has been narrated good. the theme is destuction. the way u began the poem is good. it was a long poem but never did i felt it was ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Cosmic Eulogy
is not this a very short poem to be published or to be reviewed. the line which u wrote is good stays that love is like glittering stars which are ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: In need of a chance
it is part of a hindu epic mahabharata
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Scarred Memories
this poem is a bit tedious but a very emotional one. the last tpo lines are very posetive. i lov the way u tell that those scars owe ur past ...
May 18, 2015 -
Re: A Blank White Page
I liked this poem alot.ThE WAY OF NARRATION IS AWESOME. The poem first describes the feeling when one writes anything for the first the mid of the poem u 2 ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: My Best Friend
Its brought the gay theme very posetively.the morale is that if one is gay,atleast hw or she should not have a pessimist approach to it and should not think of ...
Apr 15, 2015
