Hello , this is a very good poem. From the first moment on , I get the impression you're trying to write in Homer's footsteps , in an Ancient Greek tragedy kind of style. This lamenting of Helen is a beautiful piece of work in terms of context as it gives the reader an insight into Helen's feelings and thoughts about what has happened and what -she hopes- will come to pass. It is an interesting description of her emotional state during the final -as I understood- stages of the Trojan War. The words that you choose add up to the emotional tension of the poem and create the needed atmosphere for Helen's regretful monologue. However , throughout the poem I get the feeling you copied and pasted the poem from one text format to another and the alignement (if I am saying it correctly) of the words seems kinda off , like words that should be on one line have ended up in the one below it. Also , while a very good read , it is quite a long poem and in my opinion , tires the reader by the end of the reading. The essence is what makes this poem beautiful but its size takes away from that essence. All in all a nice and mainly interesting poem that has some flaws that keep it back.
Keep writing friend and goodnight !
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Reviews: 7
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