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ryleigha

  • Short Story » Other, Literature Re: Youth

    Hey there! This is really well written! I totally agree with the idea that while we age, we can still choose to be young, and that our youth doesn't really ...

    Feb 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: i refuse to outlive you

    Hello! This is so very lovely and Romantic! You are able to capture a scene perfectly in two stanzas while also making me wish someone was reading this to me! ...

    Feb 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Too Small Too Big

    Hey there! This is an awesome poem about the way you feel when you aren't quite sure where you belong. First, the awesome dichotomy that you have in every stanza ...

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Poetry Anthology (Part 1)

    Hey there! I'm just going to split this up by entry so it's easier to read! Also, only take the feedback want, these are all just suggestions! Entry 1: I ...

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Other » Culture, Realistic Re: English-Speech, Distinction level

    Hi there! I really enjoyed this speech! I too believe that cancel culture is extremely toxic, and the "guilty until proven innocent" mindset that you mentioned does not allow for ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Modern-Day Medusa

    Hello Dearie!! This is amazing. That's all I really have to say. Your writing style is absolutely beautiful and you are extremely talented! I love how you took the myth ...

    Oct 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Insanity

    Hey there! I absolutely love this poem! It fits the spooky vibes of October perfectly. Part of me feels like it is a perfect addition to The Telltale Heart or ...

    Oct 16, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Memories and Ashes

    Hey Shima! I would like to start off by saying that this is an amazing story! I really liked the idea of a future self coming back to warn their ...

    May 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Love Will Tear Us Apart

    Hey there! This poem is beautiful and heartbreaking. I love how much you are able to allude through with the short lines that you wrote in!! It really makes me ...

    May 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Hausbar 13; St. George's

    Hey Morrigan! I'm here to review this poem on behalf of the Gryffindor team! I usually have a hard time reviewing poems because, as with all art, each viewer is ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Alex and Jay/2

    Hello again Elinor! This is Ry again with Griffindor here to review part 2! I'm so glad you have a second part! I really loved the second part of this ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Alex and Jay/1

    Hi Elinor! My name is Ry and I'm reviewing your story on behalf of Gryffindor today! Happy review day and April 25, which is the best date, because all you ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Moonrider

    Hi there! I really loved this poem! I liked how it reminded me of some early Romanticism poetry! However, I do not see the fear that causes the wild woman ...

    Apr 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter Two

    Hi there! I really liked this story! I think it is an interesting take on a succession problem. Just some quick notes, though! When you mention that Beston's parents are ...

    Apr 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Horror Re: BISON - ch. 01.1

    Hi there! This was really good! I really liked the way you describe Ezra's movement and his mannerisms. While I was reading this it really felt like I was reading ...

    Apr 25, 2020


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