rubberduck

Hey there, here's a quick review. :) It's a lovely piece, to be honest. I have a suggestion though, perhaps you'd like to edit this bit? “Well, did you go?” ...

That was a sad ending. :( Review: I think the starting alphabets of your stanzas (at least) should be capitalized. Oh, and remember to capitalise the alphabet after a period. ...

Didn't find any errors, so I'll just make this a super quick review. :) I really enjoyed reading this. It was a very gripping read. Just a question though. What's ...

Hey, here's a quick review. :) Hate is a terriable feeling Hate is a terriable sight to behold Spelling error. Terrible . Feel It for the people I thought love ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, Ambe! Just a quick reminder: Since you've posted one piece of work, you should review two pieces of work. It'll replenish your points, and allow ...

One story that I have been told, Tells of Pebbles, brave and bold. Stands behind the garden shed, Slowly, slowly, raises his head. A hero's mask upon his face, He ...

Hey, this was a good poem. I'll nitpick at some things though. I feel i've been contaminated. I 've . And the line should be, ' I feel like I've ...

Hey there. It's good to pour your emotions out and not bottle them up. (This statement is only applicable if this poem is a true story.) So, here's a review. ...

Maybe it's your avatar's influence, but I had an image of a beach and a couple on a hammock while I was reading this. So, anyway, review time. The moon ...

Hey there. I'll be quoting your poem in made-up stanzas, so it's easier to read. :) And to the terror for which it speaks a rolling bellow now beseaks For ...

Hey there. Just a quick review here. Where the words are written but their not spoken Where the words are written but they're not spoken And you don't have to ...

Hey. The font size makes it look pretty, but unfortunately, it's a little hard to read. Saw that you're thinking of deleting your account. It'll be a pity if you ...

Hey there. I'm breaking the whole poem down into stanzas. It'll be easier to read and spot things. :) Everything will be OK. Ill open my eyes another day. Tears ...

Hey there. Here's a quick review. Trapped in this body, about to explode, Gunna spread my soul throughout this world, Without seconds thoughts, or even a doubt, Flowing with the ...

Hey there. I'm going to make a guess and say that this poem is about a strained relationship that finally came to an end? That was the impression I got ...