Tehe thanks

No I have no idea who the rebels are, everyone is asking- I really should come up with an answer.

- K
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Hi there. Lavvi in to review.

This is a cute poem. It reminds me of those stories we would make up when we were little children. The poem is most definitely supernatural, with all this stuff going on. But it's warm and kind. But who are the rebels? Or is it just something that needed to go in there?

It's like a story for fun, like a hero's tale. You know, we read about Hercules and stuff, but here, really, we should be reading about Pebbles

Yours,
Lavvi

Tehe Tehe Tehe!
Glad you liked it.
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I like it! Why aren't there more stories about superhero tortoises?
I did notice flies was misspelled (misspelled: also a word that is misspelled almost daily) and Marvin is either missing an i the first time you spell his name or Marvn has an i added the second. But that's all, because it was adorable, and I'm a sucker for adorable!
Keep writing and tehe it up, buddy!

I have no idea who the rebels are. I guess it's just nonsense.
Thanks Guys

One story that I have been told,
Tells of Pebbles, brave and bold.
Stands behind the garden shed,
Slowly, slowly, raises his head.
A hero's mask upon his face,
He flies with beauty, and with grace.
He swerves and dips in the sky,
With sharp ears, he hears a cry.
'Oh help me, help me Pebbles!'
A little Rabbit, taunted by rebels.
Pebbles sees and dips straight in,
Bif! Bash! Pow! The end of the din.
'Thank you! Thank you!'
Cries little Rabbit, who,
Incidentally was called Marvin,
Silly, stupid, shaken Marvin.
Pebbles has done his work for the day,
And so returns to his box and warm hay. (A tortoise living in a box filled with hay? Hmm, kind of cute, now that I think about it.)
A good day's work, a fair fight,
And so our hero says 'Goodnight!'

It's a cute poem. I'm making a guess that the 'rebels' are cats?
Keep writing!

Haha, this poem is awesome! Not sure why a tortoise would help a rabbit, but whatever! Anyway, I want to know who exactly is taunting the rabbit. You said rebels, but I think it may be cuter to actually say what the rebel is. It might be funny if the rebel was an insignificant insect, like a cricket or something!

Anyway, it's very cute.