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haha thanx guys
Putting the spelling errors aside, really loved it.
Good poem Bush ;b
You'll go far, but first you have to take care off the spelling problems! (don't worry I have the same problem, will take care of it xD)
Thanks, I do believe that my weakness is my spelling. I don't get to practice that anymore. Thanks again haha
Hey, this was a good poem. I'll nitpick at some things though.
I've. And the line should be, 'I feel like I've been contaminated.
Period.
Spelling error. Memory.
Yet, he is to blame,
I.
I see my life laid out before me,
Full of scorn and hatred.
Believing.
Collide.
Two tips for you:
1. Take care to capitalise your 'I's.
2. Double check your spelling.
My favourite stanzas were these:
Ignoring the spelling error, I liked these two stanzas very much and felt they stood out from the poem.
I enjoyed reading the poem. Keep writing!