rothwise

Hi Tiny! This is a really cute poem, I know I've felt those first kiss jitters before and can definitely relate to this. There's just a couple spelling/grammar mistakes I ...

Hi Converse! Let me start off by saying that I am a big sucker for haikus, and this one was no exception. It's beautifully crafted in very simple words - ...

Hi there! I just wanted to write in and say that I absolutely loved this piece! It's fun, easy to read, and is totally true. I love the analogy you ...

Hi there! I see you've been getting a lot of negative criticism for this poem, and I'm sorry for that. I don't think it should be receiving as much as ...

Hi there! This piece is lovely. Other people have commented already, and I think they've made the note of changing "my" to "me" in the first line, so I don't ...

Hey, rothwise here! Sooo let me start off with the title. I was intrigued by the title, since it was longer than most usually are. But that being said, I ...

Hi there! I'll be honest with you, the first read I had of the poem, I wasn't it's biggest fan. BUT after going back through and reading it a few ...

A lovely piece. I have never lost someone close to me to death, but I have certainly lost people as friends and relationships, so I feel I can relate in ...

This piece was magnificent. I want to thank you for it - you're going to change a lot of lives with this piece, just by letting people know that it's ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I'll be honest, I had to read it a couple times to understand what you were getting across (which is a ...

I really appreciate this poem! I'm a sucker for free verse (my writing style of choice), and I think the simplicity of this poem really helped me to relate to ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece! I could definitely relate to it and apply it to writing poetry (analogous to your piano playing). I can tell from your writing that ...

Oh my. I was incredibly moved by this piece - probably more so than I expected to be. I'm not sure what you're going through at this time in your ...

I wasn't quite sure what to expect when I clicked on the poem, but I found I actually really liked it. You were able to exemplify everything that teens/young adults ...

Very nice job on the palindrome poem! I didn't realize it was a palindrome until after the poem you said it was, and then it shocked me that I could ...