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Hey thegoldenbird! Let's dive straight into the review: First things first, what I liked about this poem of yours is that it conveys a very raw and inner feeling that ...

I like these sort of scenes. I like to think of them as pathway to a bigger story - the gateway drug, if you will. I liked the narration - ...

Yo Deepstries! Welcome to YWS! I am rohan and let us head into reviewing your piece. I liked the beginning as it dived straight away to the point. No need ...

Hey Sweta! Let me begin by telling you that I liked the scene for its merits that included generating genuine interest in the characters which are Mia and her mother. ...

Okay! so this is something new and different. Now I don't understand the entire thing nor could I find a completely coherent meaning out of it but you've got zero ...

Hey destinybeal it's me again! Before I begin let me tell you I am laughing my ass off as I am typing this. It's a short one and frankly, after ...

Hi destinybeal! Let us jump onto the review part for which you are here (I hope so). First things first, I liked how you (successfully) tried to keep things realistic ...

Hi! I read this twice, first as a poem and second time as phrase. I enjoyed it the second time. The idea is really good. I liked the way you ...

Hi Veni! I'm here for a quick review. So without any further delay let's dive into it. I'm not really a fan of short poems but this one hit me ...

Hi, TheChristianWriter! Let's run into my review of your work very quickly. I found the poem very simple and concise which is a good thing. The message is very clear. ...

Hi! I like this poem mainly for its childlike singsong rhythm. The good thing - It follows the rules, and has a flow which makes the poem enjoyable. Also, selection ...

Hi! A hardcore batman Fan here for a review (I searched if there's anything on Batman on YWS and yours came up!) As a form of speech (I'm judging a ...

Hi Deeproses, Rohan here for review! Beautiful poem. I liked the imagery and the easy flow of emotion throughout the poem. I imagined the girl being the poetess who is ...

Hi! I liked the poem for its honesty and it seems it is conceived after a lot of pain which emerges out beautifully in this work. Now for the parts ...

Hi! This is indeed a beautiful and articulate work. I hope you don't get suicidal thoughts (and if you do, please make sure it stays on the paper). The utter ...