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Hello, rhia here to review! Nitpicks first: With a pang, I realize what a spoiled life I had led. your verb tenses don't agree, it should either be "realized what ...

Hello, rhia here to review. Even though I really like the content of this poem, I find that I cannot enjoy it much at all because the rhyme scheme feels ...

Hello, rhia here to review as promised. I'm going to start with nitpicks: 1) I have no idea where I am, but a beach. This is a little awkward in ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Proofread and suggestions first... 1) No matter what it revels I'm pretty sure "revels" is meant to be "reveals" 2) Every night as you take ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to start with editing and suggestions 1) Try me I say to it. Since this is dialogue, it needs to be in quotations, ...

Hello, rhia here to review! I'm going to start with nitpicks: 1) In just a moment and your golden thread has been snipped, The "and" here is unnecessary, it doesn't ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! As far as content goes, I love it. I am iin just the same position, so it relates, and makes it very personal to me. ...

Hello, rhia here to review. Welcome to YWS! You did a good job of getting the rhythm and rhyme scheme of limericks, it was very light and fun. It possesed ...

Hello, rhia here to review. As I've said before, this is really not my type of poetry, so I'll review mostly on structure, not content. I think that you mostly ...

See, Monsters, we do have plenty we agree on. Poe. Poe please. I lied earlier when I said E. E. was my only god, Poe is pretty godly to me ...

Okay, I can relate to this so much. My first boyfriend, I dated for way too long before realizing he wasn't good for me. Looking back, I realized he was ...

Hello, retro, rhia here to review. I hope you've been having a nice day. The thought of living make me sick with fury. "make" should be "makes" Perhaps why so ...

Hey, Thomas, here to review! Just a few nitpicks first... Why, you may ask. Should have a question mark is all. You ignore the Health & Science majors and take ...

Hello, Rhia here to review! Just a few nitpicks first... Piper stayed standing in front of them and May titled her head, beckoning her to follow. "titled" should be "tilted" ...

Hello, rhia here to review! Nitpicks first: He grips his pointed teeth, and lets out a blood thirst roar. I think that thirst is meant to be "thirsty" He searches ...