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Re: you were my home.
Hey there, Retro here for a review. So to start off this is fantastic. Having a quick glance through some of your other works you have a really interesting mastery ...
Feb 11, 2023 -
Re: you taste like breezy, open-windowed evenings
Hello there! Retro for a review! So really love your imagery in this and the way you develop your ideas. You've done very well in creating a microcosm of something ...
Feb 8, 2023 -
Re: The silent struggle
Why hello there! Retro here for a review. So really like this poem, like the sort of up dregged up horror-ness of it but in a very internalised horror which ...
Feb 8, 2023 -
Re: Romancing the Girl from West Virginia
Hello! Deciding to do my first review in literal years and wow what a poem! You have a fantastic way of creating imagery and the ideas of the almost quiet ...
Feb 8, 2023 -
Re: white gold // a purity previously unknown
Hey there, Retro here! Now I don't have much to say on the piece. It is very neat and well derived and I think it is pretty fantastic. I just ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: The Body/The Bomb
Hey there, Retro here to do a mini review. Now, other than the 6th to last line there aren't any mistakes, so instead I'm going to make offer some suggestions ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: The Field of the Amaranth
Hey there! Retro here to do a review. So my style is I point out some suggestions and nitpicks and then at the end i'll talk about what I liked, ...
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: Collisions
Hello! Retro here to leave a little review for your piece! First of I'll talk about one of two little nit picks then about what I loved, okay, :) In ...
Aug 10, 2015 -
Re: what is it like to disappear?
Hello retro here for s review!!!! I'll do some nitpicking and then talk about what I loved, okay? Right my main nitpick is I don't understand "poka dot - striped ...
Jun 23, 2015 -
Re: Your Inner Kid
Hello! Retro here to do a little review!! Okay I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked okay? Right my main issue here is the rhyme. Because some ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Halo
Hello! Retro here! First I'll do some nit picks then I'll talk about what i liked, okay? Right. Okay, you use archaic language in this poem, which in itself is ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Soiling Stigma
Hola! Retro here to do a review. First I'll offer some feedback on the piece then get into what I liked, okay? Right first off, excellent idea. However, I feel ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Some Things Are Just Comparable It Seems
Retro here! Just popping for a few comments. I just wanted to say how I loved the simplicity of the piece. I thought that the simplicity truly heightened the emotion ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: Church
Hello! Retro here to do a review. Okay I'll do a quick nitpick then talk about what I loved okay? My nitpick is only a suggestion but the line in ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Naive Cinderella
Hi retro here! So for this review first I'll do some nitpicks then talk about what I liked, okay? Right my main huge nitpick it line length. In terms of ...
Jun 2, 2015