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  • Other » Fanfiction, Lyrical Re: A child’s dream becomes warped with the world’s evil

    Hello there, creeperfeverdreams! I thought this poem presented such an interesting perspective on serial killers and how they come to be. We always envision them as adults, but we always ...

    Jun 11
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, General Re: freezing point - prologue

    Hello, noridori! I was intrigued by this prologue and decided to review it. Let’s get to it!
 I love how you described the scenery in the beginning. I found that ...

    Jun 11
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fawn

    Bonjour cherie! I really liked this poem and decided to review it. So...let's do it, shall we? I just wanted to comment and say that I find the style that ...

    Jun 11
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: late night confession

    Hello!
 I really liked this poem and wanted to leave a review, so let’s get started :))!! I am drowning in myself. Not in water, but in every thought, every ...

    Jun 9
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: ​Between Us, One Hundred

    I loved this song! It reminds me a lot of a loved one I lost a few years ago. Where she runs, I hope to go. Where she stays, I ...

    Jun 8
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: MOTP: May 14

    I really liked this short story and it reminded me a lot of something I went through as well, so I sympathized a lot. I never fully knew why I ...

    Jun 8
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: Death Wish

    I thought it was so cool that you wrote a poem in Japanese! Now, I wish I listened to my 13-year-old self and stuck to studying Japanese lol. I believe ...

    Mar 24
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: In Deep

    I thought this short story was awesome and I personally felt really inspired by it as I am also intending on writing something involving the character's connection with the water. ...

    Mar 24
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Suicide

    Hey, TrueHim! This piece of writing that you published today was quite raw and while I don't understand your exact situation, I understand that kind of pain and anger and ...

    Mar 24
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Sun

    Hey, Alex! I'm very happy to see more writing from you! This poem was so bittersweet and I found myself relating to some parts. The poem starts off with the ...

    Aug 9, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: The dragon Sword

    I would first like to say welcome to YWS, Roohas! I hope you like it here and find what you're looking for. Your first work already shows much promise and ...

    Aug 8, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love's Hands Are Clean, (You Cheater)

    As an avid fan of Greek mythology, I loved the reference to Pasiphae. It really showed how much this person messed up if they're somehow doing worse than a woman ...

    Aug 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Satire, Technology Re: Robo, I and Chess

    I found this poem extremely fun to read! I loved how you consistently pointed out how data and pattern recognition cannot predict nor fully capture the human soul and why ...

    Aug 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Praise of Nature

    Great work, WinnyWriter! I too cannot live if not a single green leaf were near me. I have always felt a strong connection to nature, especially to mountains and valleys. ...

    Aug 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Garbage machina

    This poem was such a pleasant read! As someone who wants to be in the medical profession, I was entranced and yet horrified by how you described chronic illness (I ...

    Aug 5, 2025


Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality