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  • Other » Fanfiction, Lyrical Re: A child’s dream becomes warped with the world’s evil

    Hello there, creeperfeverdreams! I thought this poem presented such an interesting perspective on serial killers and how they come to be. We always envision them as adults, but we always ...

    Jun 11
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, General Re: freezing point - prologue

    Hello, noridori! I was intrigued by this prologue and decided to review it. Let’s get to it!
 I love how you described the scenery in the beginning. I found that ...

    Jun 11
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fawn

    Bonjour cherie! I really liked this poem and decided to review it. So...let's do it, shall we? I just wanted to comment and say that I find the style that ...

    Jun 11
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: late night confession

    Hello!
 I really liked this poem and wanted to leave a review, so let’s get started :))!! I am drowning in myself. Not in water, but in every thought, every ...

    Jun 9
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: ​Between Us, One Hundred

    I loved this song! It reminds me a lot of a loved one I lost a few years ago. Where she runs, I hope to go. Where she stays, I ...

    Jun 8
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: MOTP: May 14

    I really liked this short story and it reminded me a lot of something I went through as well, so I sympathized a lot. I never fully knew why I ...

    Jun 8
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: Death Wish

    I thought it was so cool that you wrote a poem in Japanese! Now, I wish I listened to my 13-year-old self and stuck to studying Japanese lol. I believe ...

    Mar 24
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Narrative Re: In Deep

    I thought this short story was awesome and I personally felt really inspired by it as I am also intending on writing something involving the character's connection with the water. ...

    Mar 24
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Suicide

    Hey, TrueHim! This piece of writing that you published today was quite raw and while I don't understand your exact situation, I understand that kind of pain and anger and ...

    Mar 24
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Sun

    Hey, Alex! I'm very happy to see more writing from you! This poem was so bittersweet and I found myself relating to some parts. The poem starts off with the ...

    Aug 9, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror Re: The dragon Sword

    I would first like to say welcome to YWS, Roohas! I hope you like it here and find what you're looking for. Your first work already shows much promise and ...

    Aug 8, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Love's Hands Are Clean, (You Cheater)

    As an avid fan of Greek mythology, I loved the reference to Pasiphae. It really showed how much this person messed up if they're somehow doing worse than a woman ...

    Aug 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Satire, Technology Re: Robo, I and Chess

    I found this poem extremely fun to read! I loved how you consistently pointed out how data and pattern recognition cannot predict nor fully capture the human soul and why ...

    Aug 6, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Praise of Nature

    Great work, WinnyWriter! I too cannot live if not a single green leaf were near me. I have always felt a strong connection to nature, especially to mountains and valleys. ...

    Aug 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Garbage machina

    This poem was such a pleasant read! As someone who wants to be in the medical profession, I was entranced and yet horrified by how you described chronic illness (I ...

    Aug 5, 2025


Be happy, my friend; and if you obey me in this one request, remain satisfied that nothing on earth will have the power to interrupt my tranquility.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein