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That's a good story! I was really intrigued by the last line. Now some suggestions: The wording was a little awkward in some places. Try to cut out unnecessary phrases ...

Hello! I love this poem for it's theme an simplicity, and how we can all empathize with it! When at school we are taught the difference between 'house' and 'home', ...

Hi! This is really good! And really hilarious! I've reviewed 7 poems today, and all of them were really emotional/thought provoking/serious, i really needed a poem like this a lot; ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS and congratulations on your first work. I just love abstract poetry , forget poetry, i love abstract anything! Okay so here is my interpretation of the ...

Hi! To be honest i don't usually like reading essays. But i must applaud you when i say that i enjoyed reading this and wanted to finish! I did notice ...

Hello! This is a really amazing poem. It simplicity and rhythm really touched me and I've read this many times over. It shows us how we overlook the tiniest details ...

Hi! I see you've just joined! Welcome! I see you've written this for a special someone, though one can have multiple interpretations for a poem like this. The simplicity makes ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS and congratulations on your first work! I hope you love it here! I love the theme of this poem for several reasons. It asks questions about ...

Hi! This is good! And i love how you have raised questions about today's world, and shown how we can, with the minimal effort, work together and improve our lives ...

This is really good!!! It felt really authentic and true,like it was coming straight from your heart;and it really touched mine. I have no suggestions for edits, as i couldn't ...

That is a good poem! Now i personally love poems that have multiple interpretations, as they give one the freedom to empathise with them in their own way. This is ...

Okay.... That was pretty good.I really enjoyed the plot it kept me indulged through out the story, and there wasn't one moment when I was even scarcely bored. I do ...

First of all, I really liked the illustrations!!! ,:did you do them yourself? The grammar wasn't very good, first of all, you're using the word bluey to much, for eg. ...

That was pretty good, and I definitely didn't see the twist coming.,and I bet no one did! The description of a few things was a bit shaky, like (The anchorman ...

Well, I must say that I did enjoy the story. I really like how you started,and maintained the pace:it wasn't to slow/ fast,:it was just right.I did see some grammatical ...