Hugs

by abrea123

Published November 29, 2018

E - Everyone

In poetry

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Today will be great,

I cannot wait,

When I see you,

I just want to,

hug you tight,

with all my might.

Comments & reviews · 6
potatoefry2001 wrote a review Review · Dec 7, 2018

First of all, welcome to the YWS!!! Great job on this piece! I like how simple and positive it is. If you haven't already, I would love for you to check out what I have written and tell me your thoughts about my pieces!! Again, welcome!!! And happy readings and writings!!! Have a great day!! That's all I have to say for now! 'Tato, out!!!

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promptlyby12
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promptlyby12 wrote a review Review · Dec 2, 2018

Hi!
I see you've just joined! Welcome!
I see you've written this for a special someone, though one can have multiple interpretations for a poem like this. The simplicity makes this poem very sweet and and adds a lot of credibility to it. I've read this multiple times over and over again, it just makes me feel so good!
Good day to you!

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MarieLugo1998 commented Comment · Nov 30, 2018

Short and sweet. Your poem brightened my day. Keep it up!

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Samhain wrote a review Review · Nov 30, 2018

Cute! You don't need the comma after "I just want to".
Sometimes a "short and sweet" is all someone needs to feel better. I can tell you might've written this with the intent to console someone (My interpretation), and the simplicity makes it all the more sincere and meaningful. I see that you just joined the YWS! I sort of did too, just a few days ago. Welcome to the community!

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1nspire commented Comment · Nov 30, 2018

This is so adorable! There is so much beauty in simple things like getting a hug from someone you care about and this captured that perfectly. Amazing poem!

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FireSpyGirl commented Comment · Nov 29, 2018

Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here!

So this is a really cute poem! It is simple without being too simple, and it says everything in a few words. I love that!



Homo sum, humani nihil a me alienum puto (I am a man, I don't consider anything human foreign to me)
— Terence