Today will be great,
I cannot wait,
When I see you,
I just want to,
hug you tight,
with all my might.
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First of all, welcome to the YWS!!! Great job on this piece! I like how simple and positive it is. If you haven't already, I would love for you to check out what I have written and tell me your thoughts about my pieces!! Again, welcome!!! And happy readings and writings!!! Have a great day!! That's all I have to say for now! 'Tato, out!!!
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I see you've written this for a special someone, though one can have multiple interpretations for a poem like this. The simplicity makes this poem very sweet and and adds a lot of credibility to it. I've read this multiple times over and over again, it just makes me feel so good!
Good day to you!
Short and sweet. Your poem brightened my day. Keep it up!
Cute! You don't need the comma after "I just want to".
Sometimes a "short and sweet" is all someone needs to feel better. I can tell you might've written this with the intent to console someone (My interpretation), and the simplicity makes it all the more sincere and meaningful. I see that you just joined the YWS! I sort of did too, just a few days ago. Welcome to the community!
This is so adorable! There is so much beauty in simple things like getting a hug from someone you care about and this captured that perfectly. Amazing poem!
Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here!
So this is a really cute poem! It is simple without being too simple, and it says everything in a few words. I love that!