So reading this, my initial thoughts were that it was okay. Now, knowing that you wrote it from your feelings, I think this is extraordinary!! Your piece was filled with intense emotions and made me cry. I don't know why people say "home is where the heart is," but for you, I gather that this statement is very true in your life! Great Job on the way you express your thoughts and emotions through your art. If you have not already, I suggest you take a trip to the Green Room to read the poem called "hurt" written by me. I would love to hear your thoughts on my writing style! It's my first time writing and publishing publicly for other people to read. Please be honest! anyways, great piece!
Happy Writings!!!
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