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Hi! What I like: I like the whole metaphorical structure, and how that makes it easier to relate with the poem, and also adds 'power' to it. I find metaphor ...

Hi! Okay so first let's talk about structure: My first suggestion is regarding the length of each line. You should keep each line as concise as you possibly can, and ...

Hiya Anamel! This is beautiful. I mean purely beautiful. I love the form, the rhythm and the idea. That reminds me, I should talk about my interpretation of the poem, ...

Hi Anamel! I gotta say, the title really had me hooked, i read it and I was like, "I've got to read this" and I applaud you for that. In ...

Hello cat! Let's start with my interpretation.I think the whole thing is a metaphor for life goals. All these friends represent something everyone goes through. Every toddler has big 'unrealistic' ...

Hello wolf! One thing you should know about me is that i love stories about the world wars( especially the second one), so as soon as I read the first ...

Hi luke! I'll start with saying that I really like the basic idea, and your approach towards bringing it out. However, I believe you might need to work on how ...

Hi! Im going to start by saying that one thing I really like about this poem is that it defines 'consequences' as an object rather than the typical connotation of ...

Hi! If you remember I reviewed the original version of this poem! Well here I am again! If you remember, I interpreted the poem as narrated by emotions seeking out ...

HI! That is quite interesting! I personally like short poems that are descriptive nevertheless, but don't spoonfeed the reader with information: They make one think. That's what I love about ...

Hello! Let's start with my interpretation: I interpret it as narrated by emotions, i.e. the emotions inside a person's head, that keep babbling about. One thing I think we all ...

Awww! The moment I saw that first picture, I knew this would be my reaction as the story ends! I love the friendship you bave established, and the fact is ...

Hi! This was very interesting! It kept me constantly on my toes. Your descriprions were very good and made me feel for the character as the story progressed. Few of ...

Hello! I really loved the theme of the poem and how you have approached it.The first stanza sounded repetitive and i was a bit put off by it. But then ...

Okay Wow! When I first started reading this, I started noticing a few mistakes that I was going to point out, like frequently reffering to the warrior soul as a ...