I think this was really nice to read.
I love how it was short but sweet, in a sense.
I could feel the tone really shining through and the way it was written was really nice, how you spaced things out and just how each line flowed into the next so nicely. I love it, I love it so much. I too enjoy the dark, and the imagery and metaphors you placed in was really nice, the way you had a blanket represent how the night feels was a great choice, I think. I don't think I would have ever made a connection between a blankets warmth and reassurance to the nights peace and comfort. I feel that this was a good way to show how the night is really soothing for some people, and I can relate to this poem pretty well. Well done, this was fantastic!
~Imma
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