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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Burninhell, this was some seriously awesome work. The werewolf is my favourite character, and it'd be great if you could explore him in greater depth later on e.g What are ...

    Aug 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Love Poem No. 7

    Hi, priceofwords here! Wow, this was such a sweet poem! Some really nice imagery as well as a few metaphors here. It also makes a change from all the poems ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: His Trap

    Hello, priceofwords here! This haiku was really cool, your use of language and the way in which it flowed were excellent! Your spelling, punctuation and grammar were perfect too, so ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: stay where you belong

    Hello, priceofwords here! This was a really sweet yet a sad poem at the same time, I love the way you start it so the narrator sounds loyal, almost happy ...

    Aug 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fountain of Knowledge

    Hello, priceofwords here! Wow, this poem was very cool, with an intriguing concept. I don't think I have ever come across a writer who explores the ways in which knowledge ...

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: When the Struggle Is Real

    Hey, priceofwords here! I thought your poem was very humourous, playful and extremely relatable, which is sure to attract other readers! Your spelling, punctuation and grammar are all very good, ...

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Wander

    Hello, priceofwords here! Wow, for your first poem this was amazing! It really captured the true beauty of nature. Your use of language was excellent, and there were no spelling, ...

    Jul 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Guy Who Isn't Deranged, And His Name Is...

    Hey, priceofwords here! This was a pretty cool poem. Really chatty and lively, the words practically bounced off the page. I can tell you like this person a lot, and ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Telling Lies

    Hello, priceofwords here! I really liked how you conveyed so much emotion in a poem. It felt like a sort of deluge of thoughts as well as feelings, and I ...

    Jul 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Land of Milk and Honey

    Hey, priceofwords here! :) Before I carry on with the review, I think you should write more poetry if this was only for a homework assignment. You certainly have a ...

    Jul 23, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Awaken

    Hello, priceofwords here! Wow, this is the first lyrical piece of work I've read on this site and I have to say it is really good. As DeepCrystal said, it ...

    Jul 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Crazy Is crazy does - first shared work...

    Hi, priceofwords here! I really liked this poem, you used groups of three lines that rhymed throughout which is quite a rare pattern and used exceptionally well, so well done! ...

    Jul 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Smiles Can Hide a Million Words

    Hello, priceofwords here! :) I liked the vast amount of imagery you put into this poem, it made the little story you told come to life, so well done for ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Secrets, hidden by me from myself.

    Hey, priceofwords here :) I really liked this story, it was adorable and something that a lot of people can relate to. The way you described this boy whom the ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rain helps to hide the tears

    Hello, priceofwords here :) I really liked this story. Yes, it was short, but it was short in a way that added suspense and emotion because there was that feeling ...

    Jul 16, 2015


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