This poem got my spirits up after reading a depressing one. I like how you twisted a depressing topic such as unemployment into something that someone can laugh at.
It is admirable that you don't rhyme with every line but instead add in some different endings so it doesn't seem like a limerick, although it doesn't stick to a pattern or rhythm and that's problematic.
I also like how you don't make it too choppy by adding semicolons and commas in your end-of-sentence punctuation. It's a good poem overall.
Hope you get employed!
Points: 284
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