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I know you posted on my wall months ago but I have literally only just logged in, sorry!! First off, I love this poem. I read alot of Sylvia Plath ...

I love this! I thought the imagry was great and I really like the subject. You had a smart choice of language here and I especially loved the "mourning bird" ...

I loved this! The imagry and metaphors used were very high quality. So proud of you!!! I expect to see more. If I didn't know you I'd still get exactly ...

I liked this, our writing style is intriguing but I feel that this poem was lacking something. It just didn't feel right to me. Meh, just my own personal opinion ...

I didn't really understand this or get what meaning you were trying to convey. What are you trying to get across to the reader? It just seemed like a bunch ...

The Beast By TheCodex My feet pound the grass under my cleat

Jessa this is truly beautiful. Tragic, but beautiful. You tackled a very controversial and hard subject head on with great success. I thought the detail you paid to imagry and ...

I gnore the top comment. Do not ellaborate on this because I think that you will lose the poem's great mystery. Unveiling only what we need to know to create ...

You handled a sensitive topic, often associated with sleaze and candid humour, very surprisingly beautiful. I love the repetition of "love". I loved this most definitley. Well done and keep ...

Okay so the topic was a little bit cliche, but so is everything else nowadays so I wouldn't care too much. Nice structure, I like your style. Fluid expressive writing. ...

I liked this really presented a strong image of a rainy day in my mind and I loved the lack of punctuation and the weird, drippy structure. I love it ...

I didn't get this at all. Just an image of a skeletal, corpse. What were you aiming for with this poem? This was not clear as I was reading the ...

OMG. How is this not a featured poem? I loved every single stanza, the cynical tone of it. I had to read it twice. Is rosaleen some kind of Las ...

I have to be honest, I date both guys and girls and I found this offensive myself. "butt-fucking" and saying "I'm here and I'm queer" is really not what gay ...

I actually love this. The word "original" is thrown around this website a lot. I really , one hundred percent feel that this is worthy of that title! It is ...